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Abusive love leaves scars,
but true love will heal them.
This is for :iconfreepoetry: 's ten words story


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StarBehindTheSun Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012
wow thats amazing :jawdrop:
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yeshu6 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011  Hobbyist Interface Designer
nice
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reintoxic Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thanks c:
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:iconxglide:
xglide Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Student Writer
sooo true =)
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:iconhoodlum-girl-rox:
hoodlum-girl-rox Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
isn't that the truth :)
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StArMigEt Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
A) I love the poem
B) I love the Kung Fu Panda reference! hehe awesome
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:iconreintoxic:
reintoxic Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :3
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:iconjunioamor:
JunioAmor Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011
So true. I think it would be less effective if it were longer. Great job.
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:iconreintoxic:
reintoxic Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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:iconcqiao355:
cqiao355 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
"How'd you find inner peace? I scarred you for life!"

"Scars heal"

"NO THEY DON'T! Wounds heal!"

"...Then what do scars do? They... fade?"
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reintoxic Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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:iconcqiao355:
cqiao355 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Lol I love KungFu Panda!!!
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luisris025 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011
Amazing, is short and has a good message (:
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:iconreintoxic:
reintoxic Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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JoshIsACartoonist Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011
I'm sorry, and I don't mean to be insulting or anything, but to me, this sounds less like a poem, and more like a euphemism. Jus' sayin'. Also, what about sadomasochism ;D
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:iconreintoxic:
reintoxic Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It's not really a poem... it's more of a 10 word story. (read description?)
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:iconjoshisacartoonist:
JoshIsACartoonist Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2011
yeah i got that, now. ^_^
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MadameThibodeau Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
There's a biiiig difference between being in an abusive relationship and being in an SM relationship. Ask anyone who has ever been in an abusive relationship of any sort, and they'll tell you. SM is about fulfilling a need in the other person. It's actually very very loving. Abusive is about taking your own needs from that person, and not caring about what it does to them.
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JoshIsACartoonist Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2011
well, the joke was it still technically leaves scars. lol idk why people aren't gettin' that
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MessyPeaches Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This!
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SoulStarforger Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011
Sado/Maso is more like a fetish than anything. It's really only related to pain and sex. Love is neither of those, so no.
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JoshIsACartoonist Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011
who's to say it's not a form of love? they're both psychological. Love and sadism/masochism. A lot of times, love can be described as a sort of masochism. And really, how do you define love anyway?
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Tristan-the-Dreamer Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Hm--far as I see it, s/m is a way of expressing love, if both people are willing participants. Same with any fetish really, I suppose.
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JoshIsACartoonist Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2011
exactly what I'm sayin'. I sorta have both sadistic and masochistic tendencies, myself. Kinda flip-flops which one is showin' up, though.
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Tristan-the-Dreamer Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
The ways love can be expressed are, pretty much, limitless. I reckon that's part of why it can be so fun. :)
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kitchenprincess96 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011
amazing poem
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:iconreintoxic:
reintoxic Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D
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:iconkitchenprincess96:
kitchenprincess96 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011
your welcome
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great-shadow-dragon Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
short, sweet, and to the point great job
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:iconreintoxic:
reintoxic Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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great-shadow-dragon Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
no problem, the true greats dont need a lot of fancy wording to get the point across, but they add it to give more body, and yes i understand this was for some 10 word thing
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